1. 大家希望构建一个和谐社会,但社会上存在一些与和谐社会不相符合的现象 2.分析造成这种现象的不良影响 3.从自身应如何做起

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问题 1. 大家希望构建一个和谐社会,但社会上存在一些与和谐社会不相符合的现象
2.分析造成这种现象的不良影响
3.从自身应如何做起

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答案 How to Construct the Harmonious Society ①There is much discussion today about how to construct a harmonious society. Along with the development of science and technology, our society becomes more and more beautiful and comfortable. ②However, there are some things that are in contrast with the harmonious society such as spitting everywhere, no awareness of public sanitation, breaking flowers rudely and so on. ③Although this kind of phenomena is seldom, yet it influences our qualities of lives. ④For one thing, to some extent, we can not enjoy a good environment, and I believe that there is no one who want to live in a scrap heap. For another, it influences our figures in front of our foreign friends that they may laugh at us. Last but not least, in the quality-oriented education today, it breaches the standard of us being a welcome person. ⑤From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that the development of our society also needs our spirits reinforce harmony element, which makes our whole society like a family. ⑥It needs us to change from ourselves and from now on; it requires us to do easy things again and again; it demands us to influence the people around us. ⑦The more we do, the nearer we are to our harmonious society.

解析 ①简要说明构建和谐社会是当今社会关注的一个话题,There is much discussion about议沦文常用句型,值得模仿。
②用两个表转折的词语转折,说明社会上还存在一些与和谐社会不相符的现象,并举出实例。no awareness of为高分短语。
③让步状语从句使文章句式富于变化,说明不良现象虽不多,却影响生活质量。
④从不良现象对生存环境、中国人的国际形象及素质教育要求三方面阐述不和谐现象的影响。For one thing…For another…Last but not least使文章衔接自然,有条理。
⑤总结全文,点明主题,we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that为亮点结构。
⑥用三个排比句说明我们应该如何从自身做起,为本文闪光点。
⑦表达自己的观点,The more…the nearer为亮点句型。
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