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  3. Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
   
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答案 An iceberg marked with "success" stands on the sea, dazzling under the sunshine. However, under the sea are generally dedication, disappointment, hard work, sacrifice, etc. , unknown to all. The above picture reflects a common phenomenon that people are often attracted by the glory of success, instead of focusing on the hardships behind success. In real life, some people will be confused inevitably by visible success. Actually, many people, on the eve of success, have undergone the sufferings hard to imagine, including some people of worldwide fame. For instance, though deaf and blind, Helen Keller became a famous writer and educator because of her firm belief, clear objective and constant efforts. Thus it can be seen that it takes a great quantity of hard work and efforts to be successful. People are likely to be deceived by the iceberg illusion, mainly because of the unreality and impatience in the pursuit of success. Apparently, we should treat success objectively by making a breakthrough of mental iceberg. On the one hand, we should realize anyone’s success cannot be done at one go. On the other hand, we also need to know success comes not by being willing to sacrifice, but by striving for what you want most.
解析     从图中各元素的关系出发分析这幅图片，其所传达的寓意就会一目了然。图片中，一座冰山横亘在海面上。冰山的一部露出海面，而另一部分则隐藏在海水中。图中的文字清楚地表明人们能看到的是阳光照耀下的代表成功的一部分冰山，看不到的是海水下面人们在通往成功的途中，所经历的奉献、努力、失望、牺牲等艰辛的过程。显而易见，文章用象征手法——冰山象征成功，引导人们如何理性看待成功。一方面，要认识到成功需付出非同一般的辛勤和努力；另一方面，也要认识到并不是你愿意付出就能获得成功。需要注意的是，这篇作文虽较易入手，但却容易偏题。考生需挖掘出成功的深层含义，切莫只对成功背后的艰辛展开单一论述。
    第一段：描述图片。图片的细节信息有：海面上的成功和海面下为成功付出的过程；人们能看到的表面和人们看不到的背后。至于“Persistence”，“Failure”以及“Sacrifice”等都是影响取得成功因素，大可不必一一列出，选出至关重要的几项描述即可。
    第二段：揭示寓意，充分延展。首先可点明主题，然后联系现实，并辅以名人事例，论证观点，呼应主题。段末可考虑分析该现象产生的原因。
    第三段：总结评论。引导人们如何客观理性地看待成功。
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