In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express your own opinion.

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问题     In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following information. Make comments and express your own opinion. You should write at least 150 words.
    校园暴力已经存在了很多年,引起了很多关注。怎样才能遏制校园暴力?请提出你的建议。

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答案 Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. are reported now and then In China, some of these problems are actually more and more prominent Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseling scheme. First of all, this counseling scheme takes preemptive measures to nib the bud of violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who will be subject to mandatory counseling. Second, counseling scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings. If a counseling scheme is set up, victims can turn to it for guidance and help. They are able to get the psychological sessions and possible intervention could be staged before it is too late. In conclusion, I think a campus-based counseling scheme is helpful and beneficial to prevent, intervene and eliminate violence.

解析 本题要求考生对“如何遏止校园暴力”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段从校园暴力在美国猖獗人题,建议在大学里面建立一个辅导机制。第二段阐述原因:其一,辅导机制能采取先发制人的措施,把暴力扼杀在萌芽状态,以防事态严重而失控。其二,辅导机制也能给可能的受害者提供帮助,有助解决受害者因害怕报复而不敢举报暴力的情况。第三段总结全文:在学校里建立辅导机制对于预防暴力、干预暴力、消除暴力是有帮助的。
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