Today, more and more parents are sending their children to colleges and universities abroad for studies. Some are even planning

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问题 Today, more and more parents are sending their children to colleges and universities abroad for studies. Some are even planning to send their kids to high schools overseas for learning. What do you think are the positive and negative sides of studying abroad? Write a composition in no less than 200 words, in which you should:
1. state the advantages of studying abroad you see:
2. state the disadvantages of studying abroad you see:
3. draw a natural conclusion.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 It is now no longer surprising to see many students go abroad for studies, and they have very good reasons for doing so. If they attend a university in a foreign country, they can learn the language, mostly English, more efficiently and understand the

解析     本篇作文属说明文类(exposition)。首段说明了海外留学的优点:有利于学习所在国的语言和文化,更重要的是能使留学生在竞争就业岗位时处于有利位置。第二段说明留学的弊端:费用昂贵,身处他乡、无亲无故。结尾段(conclusion)是前文内容的归纳。文章的写作特点是首段起首句即引出主题go abroad for studies和第一段的段落大意good reasons for doing so,下接几句分层阐述具体理由。段中较好的语言表达有most importantly,end up和putting them far ahead of等。第二段以表转折的副词nevertheless开首,第一句也是段落大意句,表示此段要谈论的是disadvantages of studying overseas,然后分别说明两点弊端costs far more money和feeling of loneliness。段中较好的语言表达除了达到了修辞效果的nevertheless外,还有first of all,not to mention,next和to confide in。结尾段中值得一提的较好词语表达有in short和whereas。
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