For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following topic. You should write at least 120 words but

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following topic. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    Companies should encourage old employees(55 years old)to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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答案 Companies Should Encourage Old Employees to Retire (1)Nowadays, a large number of employees who are more than 55 years old must retire because of the company policy:(2)therefore, many people think that the development of a company cannot be separated from the number of young employees.(3)I approve of this viewpoint based on the following reasons. (4)The main reason is that plenty of young employees mean that the company is infused with lots of fresh blood. With the development of technology, more and more new technological products have been developed. The new generation masters advanced technology and have the energy to explore.(5)Another reason is that old employees cannot adapt themselves to the fast pace. Old employees find it difficult to learn new things rapidly. So old employees are not a patch on young employees, which means not only intellect but also physical strength.(6)Last but not least, old employees have already worked for more than half of their lifetime: they have paid out too much in order to look after their families and careers, hence, they should retire to enjoy life. (7)In conclusion, old employees shouldn’t continue working for themselves. Moreover, advancement of society needs a new generation.

解析 (1)陈述企业员工55岁退休的社会事实。
(2)进一步介绍在这一社会现象下人们产生的思想观念。
(3)阐明个人观点,并引出下文。
(4)(5)(6)是作者认为公司应该鼓励老员工退休的原因。三个原因由主到次,结构分明。
(7)紧接上文陈述,总结观点:老员工应该被鼓励退休。
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