For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importance of the Past by commenting on the saying, "A

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importance of the Past by commenting on the saying, "A sense of the past is an essential part of our identity. " You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 The Importance of the Past The past, which is a general history or the past experience of oneself, is of great importance to a person’s identity. As the saying goes, "A sense of the past is an essential part of our identity. " As far as I am concerned, our identity is defined by two parts: the history of our nation and the combination of our past experience. For one thing, our biggest identity is our nation, which tells the outside world where we come from and what kind of people we are supposed to be. Thus, its history is our legacy. For another, our past experience helps determine who we really are because it builds our characters, our values and our capabilities. Without them, we will be nobody but the mere existence in the world. In a word, since we all benefit from the past, we should cherish and learn lessons from our past.

解析     这是一篇议论文,主要讨论的是历史的重要性。
    第一段阐述历史对个人身份有着至关重要的作用,由As the saying goes引出题目要求中的名言“A sense of the past is an essential part of our identity”。
    第二段对引言进行评论,从民族历史和自身经验两个方面论证了人不能独立于历史而存在。我们最大的身份是我们的国家,告诉别人我们从哪里来,是什么样的人.这是我们的遗产、:我们自身的经验则形成我们的性格、价值观和能力,决定我们是谁,否则我们只是尘世中的一粒微尘,默默无闻。本段长短句结合,句式多变,过渡短语As far as I am concerned等承上启下,结构严谨,值得借鉴。
    第三段总结全文,再次点明历史的重要性。
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