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  3. • You are a sales manager and you want to arrange a meeting with your team at the end of the month. • Write an email to your tea

• You are a sales manager and you want to arrange a meeting with your team at the end of the month. • Write an email to your tea

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问题 • You are a sales manager and you want to arrange a meeting with your team at the end of the month.
• Write an email to your team:
  • explaining the purpose of the sales meeting
  • saying how they should prepare for the meeting
  • telling them what they should do if they cannot attend.
• Write 40--50 words.
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答案Sample A The purpose of this email is to meet and discuss about our next month sales. It is also to provide a monthly statistics. you should be prepared of new ideas to improve and increase our sales, also provide a reports of the last month sales. if you can not come, please tell me in advance and be aware of the next month sales. The meeting takes place in the end of this month, I will let you know sooner. Band 2 All the content points are addressed and the information is reasonably well organised. Due to the inclusion of irrelevant information, the answer exceeds the target length and there is some repetition. The presence of several errors tends to distract the reader and create a negative effect. Sample B Please note that we will hold a sales meeting on 30 November to assess the achievement for out target this month. Please prepare your comments and feedbacks about it. Let me know in advance if you cannot attend the meeting. Thank you. Band 4 All the content points are clearly addressed, and the email is concise and clear, showing evidence of a good range of vocabulary. There are some errors, but these do not impede communication or detract from the overall positive effect on the reader.
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