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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the pi

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the pi

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on " too much care spoils a child".You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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答案 On "Too Much Care Spoils a Child" ①We can see from the picture that a blooming flower is being destroyed because of over-watering. People often do something with good intentions, but the result turns out to be quite different. ②That too much care spoils a child is a case in point. ③The problem of spoiling children is common nowadays , which has done lots of harm to our society, ④First of all, Chinese parents tend to dote on their children because many families have only one kid. Consequently, children are turning into "little princesses" and "little princes" lacking in the sense of independence and responsibility. ⑤What’s worse, the spoiled children depend on their parents for everything. As a result, once confronted with harsh reality, they are more likely to yield to hardships and difficulties. ⑥As is discussed above, going too far is as bad as not going far enough. ⑦Parents love their children by nature, but it is important to cultivate their sense of independence as well as their sense of responsibility rather than a habit of laziness. ⑧Only in this way can they become stronger to shoulder their due responsibilities.
解析 ①开篇简单描述图片内容：给花儿浇太多水，花儿不但没有开得更加绚丽，反而日趋枯萎。
②引出图片所揭示的主题：过多关爱，宠坏孩子。
③指出溺爱孩子对社会有害。
④⑤使用first of all…what’s worse…列举溺爱孩子的危害，层次分明。
⑥总结全文：过犹不及。
⑦提出建议：父母要培养孩子的独立意识和责任感，而不是懒惰的习惯。
⑧以only in this way can…倒装句型为文章增添色彩。
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