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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark , "Sometimes it is better to lose and do th

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark , "Sometimes it is better to lose and do th

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark , "Sometimes it is better to lose and do the right thing than to win and do the wrong thing. " You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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答案 On Loss With Honor Some people hold the opinion that sometimes it is better to lose and do the right thing than to win and do the wrong thing. I personally strongly agree with this point of view. In some cases, winning is significant for securing a successful life, but in most cases losing seldom ruins one’s life. However, doing the wrong thing has repeatedly shattered many successful people’s life. A case in point would be taking banned substances in sporting events. Historically, some players took them to enhance their performance to win the matches. Admittedly, a few escaped the test and won eventually, but many more were caught and disqualified, living in shame for the rest of their life. What is worse, some even died for an overdose of illicit drugs. In comparison, most honest players, no matter whether they won in the end, at least spent their remaining life in a respectable way, if not always in honor. For this reason, winning or losing sometimes means little before being an upright person first. From what has been discussed above, I can safely arrive at the conclusion that doing the right thing is always the right and wise choice.
解析     这是一篇议论文，讨论的是关于宁可失败也不能做错误的事情的重要性。
    第一段指出宁可失败做正确的事情，也不要为了成功而做错误的事情。第一句用Somepeople hold the opinion that点出主题，是六级作文中常见的开篇语。
    第二段具体阐述宁可失败也不能做错误事情的重要性，以运动员服用违禁药品为例，指出为了成功而做错误的事情毁掉了很多成功人士的美好生活。一些运动员为了能在比赛中取得好成绩使用违禁药品，结果在药检中被检出。名誉一落千丈，有些甚至因服药过量而失去了生命；更多诚实的运动员即使最后不能获胜，但能体面地生活，虽败犹荣。不管怎样，成败放后，做人为先。本段中巧妙运用Historically，Admittedly连接句子，第五句用but连接两个分句，后半句中的现在分词短语作结果状语，为亮点句式。What is worse，In comparison等短语使文章过渡自然，值得借鉴。
    第三段再次点题，得出自己的结论：做正确的事情永远是第一明智的选择。
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