In recent years, many college students have moved out of dormitory. They think they will have more freedom to live out of campus

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问题     In recent years, many college students have moved out of dormitory. They think they will have more freedom to live out of campus. But some colleges do not approve of this practice, some even suggest rules to forbid it. What is your opinion on this issue? Write a composition of about 400 words to express your idea.
    In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support your thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    You should supply an appropriate title for your essay-Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Why Not Enjoy Campus Life A new semester always brings new ideas to a campus. A new trend is the eye-catching messages on a bulletin board. "I’m a junior. I want to rent an apartment out of campus and am looking for a roommate. Requirements …" This notice is not uncommon. There are similar ones at nearly all universities. It is becoming popular for students to move out of their dormitories. I understand that convenience, privacy, comfort are the reasons why most students choose not to live in a dormitory. But I think the campus is better to live in. In China, living out of campus can be very expensive. In Shanghai, according to Shanghai Heli Renting House Company, it costs about 3,000 yuan per month to rent an apartment. Rents in other cities can be a little lower, but still it costs a lot of money. Undergraduate students do not have incomes, and the rents make the parents’ burden even heavier. Although expense is not a problem for many students, dealing with the landlords or roommates, if the apartment is shared with other people, is always a problem. And what a-bout the security? It is the major concern of the school authorities, of the teachers and the parents. Water, gas, thieves and other possible elements all puzzle the young people. Apart from all the above factors, there is another problem. Students may miss important aspects of college life. First of all, they may miss many informative posters and notices in campus. More importantly, they may miss the chance to enjoy the friendship of their schoolmates, which could be the most precious memory they have later in life. There is good reason to believe that campus life will be more convenient and colorful, because the dormitory management and service is getting better and better as a result of the collaborative efforts of the school authorites, the supporting staff and college students themselves. So why live out of campus while there is good life right in here?

解析 首段先以一则启示引出话题,对住在校外的好处表示理解,然后客观地讲出自己认为应该住校。第二段阐述应该住校的理由。第三段以号召的形式结尾,号召大家住在校园内。
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