Below is a picture showing that the community newspaper board is covered by advertisements. Look at the picture and write an ess

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问题 Below is a picture showing that the community newspaper board is covered by advertisements. Look at the picture and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following two points:
   1) what the problem is and what causes the problem;
   2) how to improve the situation.

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答案 Get Rid of Small Advertisements The cartoon vividly describes the community newspaper board covered with all kinds of small advertisements, which range from house on hire or rent to certificate on false documents. In my opinion, there are two reasons which cause such problem. First, the community’ s management system is very weak. Second, not all of community members regard the community board as an important culture in their lives. In order to improve such situation, several measures should be made. Firstly, the community manager should be responsible for checking out the surrounding environment. When seeing such advertisements, he should clean them. Secondly, community members should make efforts to supervise the daily newspaper board and protect their own special culture. As long as everyone would like to protect their community board, small advertisements would decrease gradually.

解析    这是一篇看图作文。首先要看懂图中内容:用文字简洁明了地描述图中所反映出的问题;其次,针对问题,分析原因。分析过程中可以将这一现象结合自己的生活经验,思考现象背后的深层原因。最后,结合问题和原因提出行之有效的解决方法,需要注意的是原因要内外结合,解决方法要行之有效,符合主题,分点列出,有条理,有说服力。文章结尾部分要突出其成效,表达出解决的效果。
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