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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has greater effect on your overall happiness than your social li

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问题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Your job has greater effect on your overall happiness than your social life does.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
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答案 Pursuing happiness is a life-long goal. lt has been proposed that one’s job has greater effect on his or her overall happiness than his or her social life does. l agree with this opinion based on the following reasons. Firstly, on average, one spends 8 hours a day and 5 days a week at work, which adds up to about 2,000 hours a year, excluding two weeks’ public holidays. This is a long period of time in one’s life. If one feels miserable about his or her job, then he or she is likely to bring this mood to personal life due to the long time spent on work, in comparison, one usually spends less time on social life. Therefore, on overall happiness, the influence of work seems to be greater than that of one’s social life. Secondly, work can bring people a unique sense of satisfaction, which will significantly improve people’s overall happiness. In moments when people accomplish a difficult task or achieve their career goals, they will experience a kind of happiness that cannot be replaced by any happiness coming from family and friends. The happiness obtained from work is unique because it is closely related to the meaning of life. It is an answer to the efforts people have been making in their lives every day. It evidences people’s capability, value and contribution to the society and can only be gained through work. Admittedly, social life is also a key factor contributing to one’s overall happiness. Spending some quality time with family and friends and getting to know some new friends are beneficial to one’s well-being. The love that comes from family and friendship makes one feel that he or she is not left out in this busy modern world. The happiness gained from social life is like a pinch of salt: it can spice up a meal when one needs it. But work remains the main dish of one’s life. Social life also resembles a bowl of chicken soup: one knows it is there when he or she needs to be healed. But after that, an individual will still have to face the problems and achieve goals by himself or herself. Given the reasons above, I think that social life plays a subsidiary role in shaping one’s overall happiness, on which work has a greater influence.
解析     第1段：引入主题，并表明立场。根据题干提炼出主题：幸福。改写题目，点明文章的中心思想。提出自己的观点：同意与社交生活相比，工作对个人整体幸福感的影响更大。
    第2段：阐述第一个原因。通过列举数字说明工作时间比社交时间长。说明工作时长对幸福感的影响。再强调社交时间比工作时间更短。总结第一个原因，并重申观点。
    第3段：说明第二个原因。主题句说明：工作给人带来一种独特的满足感。对此展开说明，一步步论述工作与幸福感的关联。
    第4段：总结段，采用欲抑先扬的手法。说明对方立场的合理性。通过两个生动的比喻，清楚地说明了工作与社交生活的意义：一个为主体，一个起辅助作用。自然地总结全文。
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