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  3. Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your commen

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your commen

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问题     Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
   
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答案 The pie chart shows the time distribution of different activities pupils do on summer holidays every week. As we can see, besides sleeping and having meals, pupils spend most of their time taking training classes and doing homework, while recreational activities like watching TV, outdoors activities and extra-curricular reading only take up 11% of their time! This chart reveals one of the negative influences today’s exam-oriented education system has on children—the utter imbalance between study and leisure activities, which do more harm than good to children. To be specific, long school hours, excessive homework and various training classes may knock children out, depriving them of the time and energy to learn about the world around them and develop their own interests. It’s very sad to see pupils lead such an unbalanced life at such a young age. Schools and parents are advised to decrease students’ study load, freeing up more time for them to learn about the outside world and pursue their interests.
解析     该图表描述了某市小学生在暑假期间每周做各种活动的时间分配。从图表中可知，除去正常的吃饭、睡觉外，小学生在暑假期间背负着沉重的学习压力。根据这一思路，文章可安排如下：
    第一段分析图表数据，指出小学生在暑假期间学习任务重，娱乐活动时间过少。
    第二段揭露问题：在学业和玩乐上严重不对等的时间分配对孩子弊大于利。
    第三段总结全文，给出建议，号召给孩子们更多的空闲时间。
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