Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on

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问题     Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use " Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)

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答案 Dear Sir or Madam/Librarian, As a regular reader of the library, I have benefited a lot from your excellent service. However, I do find, in the meantime, there is still room for improvement. Firstly, the library should cancel the lunch break so that students can take fuller advantage of its resources. Secondly, set up an outdoor drop-off slot for books to save the readers from returning books to the librarian. Moreover, the library can launch an email service to remind readers of the books a-vailable for lending and the books due to expire. Thank you for your reading and I’m looking forward to finding some changes in our library soon. Sincerely yours, Li Ming

解析     题目要求考生写一封建议信。根据写作要求,收信对象为某大学图书馆。鉴于收信人姓名不详,开头可参照常用写法:Dear Sir or Madam/Librarian,结尾可用Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely等。图书馆与考生的学习生活息息相关,这比较利于考生发挥。考生可从多个方面提出建议,只要内容合理即可。
    第一段:先对图书馆的服务表示感谢,继而点明主题,即图书馆的服务质量有待改善。
    第二段:联系实际生活,指出图书馆可以改进的地方,如设置外部还书处、启用电子邮箱服务等。由于提出建议的目的是让对方高度重视并采取相应措施,不可采取批评的态度或使用生硬的语气。
    第三段:以感谢、希望和期待的语句结束。
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