情景: 你的英国朋友Frank最近发来邮件询问你的近况。 任务: 请你用英文给他写一封50词左右的电子邮件,告诉他: 最近发生的一件让你高兴的事; 事情发生的时间、地点; 事情的具体经过。 电子邮件写在答题卡2上该题的序号后。请用下面格式。

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问题 情景:
你的英国朋友Frank最近发来邮件询问你的近况。
任务:
请你用英文给他写一封50词左右的电子邮件,告诉他:
最近发生的一件让你高兴的事;
事情发生的时间、地点;
事情的具体经过。
电子邮件写在答题卡2上该题的序号后。请用下面格式。
Dear Frank,
Li Min

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答案Dear Frank, First of all, I am glad to have received your e-mail! Thank you very much for your concern. I’ve been quite fine recently. And I went to the zoo on April 15th with my parents. That day was my birthday. We had a very good time in the zoo. I took photos with many lovely animals, including the panda. I was really very happy. How have you been recently? Look forward to your reply! Li Min

解析  电子邮件在写作文法上应注意以下几点:
1.切忌主客不分或模糊。例如:Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate.our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.
应改为:Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate,we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment.
2.句子不要零碎。例如:He decided not to audit the last ten contracts.
Because of our previous objections about compliance.应该连在一起.
3.结构对称,令人容易理解。例如:The owner questioned the occupant’s lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings.
应改为:The owner questioned the occupant’s lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract.
4.单复数不要搞乱,不然会看起来不舒服.
例如:An authorized person must show that they have security clearance.
所给范文结构清晰,用词简练,叙事清楚,并能够适当穿插使用词组,值得借鉴。
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