Not every person is alike. Most people have very different talents. Some people think that having a lot of friends and being pop

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问题 Not every person is alike. Most people have very different talents. Some people think that having a lot of friends and being popular is more important, while others hold that getting top grades in school is more important. And there are also some people who think both are important.
What is your opinion of this ? Write an essay in at least 120 words on the answer sheet.

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答案 Mutual Dependence and Mutual Development Currently, we have a hot debate over whether we should put more emphasis on friends and popularity or top grades. Some people hold that having a lot of friends and being popular is more important, while others hold that getting top grades in school is more important. But from my perspective, we should achieve a balance between friendship and learning, both of which will have a profound impact on our personal development. On the one hand, the importance of friends is self-evident. When we encounter difficulties, we will have the help of friends; when we meet setbacks, we will have the encouragement of friends; when we face troubles, we will have the comfort of friends. On the other hand, what matters equally is students’ good performance in school. Top grades in learning can consolidate students’ knowledge and skills and enhance students’ self-confidence, which has great potential for future development of students. In short, top grades and friendship complement each other, each of which can promote the other to develop. With friends and popularity, we can achieve cooperative learning, thus attaining top scores and genuine friendship. The fact is that we can benefit from a combination of these two aspects to maximize mutual development.

解析    认真审题,合理组织语言和内容。题目要求针对:“一些人认为有很多朋友和受欢迎更重要,而另一些人认为在学校取得好成绩更重要。也有一些人认为两者都很重要。”这一现象发表看法,写一篇至少120词的文章来陈述你的观点。这是一篇观点论证型文章,考生需对现象进行分析,写出自己的观点和看法,并进行论证。
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