For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on making mistakes by referring to the saying "The only man who neve

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on making mistakes by referring to the saying "The only man who never makes mistakes is the man who never does anything." You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 "The only man who never makes mistakes is the man who never does anything." Obsolete as it may sound, the saying is quite sensible. It indicates that to err is human, as was remarked centuries ago by Alexander Pope, the renowned British poet. Strangely enough, people exert great efforts to avoid making mistakes, which actually are part of our life. Let’s name but a few. First, we may take the wrong steps when we first learn to toddle, and fall over. However, we learn how to walk and run from it. Second, we may make friends with someone who is a hypocrite, and get hurt. But we learn to treasure real friendship, rare as it is. Last but not least we may love someone who does not deserve it, and get our hearts broken, yet the wrongs make us wise and cherish the one who is caring and loving. Mistakes are not dreadful since they are part of our life. What is dreadful is that we stop trying for fear of making mistakes. If so, we would never know how to walk, make good friends, or find Mr./ Miss Right. So, don’t fear making mistakes, just learn from them.

解析     这是一篇名言分析型作文。首先要求考生就“从不犯错的人,就是从不做任何事情的人”这句名言做出评论,并提出自己的观点;其次要求考生列举例子来阐述自己的观点。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下:
第一段:简单引述名言,揭示其内涵;
第二段:举例论证犯错的普遍性及其积极意义;
第三段:总结全文。
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