A. Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay of at least 150 words. B. Your essay must be written neatly

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问题     A. Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay of at least 150 words.
    B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
    C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:
    1. Describe the pictures.
    2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures.
    3. Suggest your counter-measures.

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答案 As is truly demonstrated in the above pictures, due to the rapid expansion of commercial fishing, ocean resources are severely depleted. In 1900, there were various kinds of fishes available for the only fishing boat in the ocean. On the contrary, in 1995, there came many fishing boats to catch the only fish swimming in the sea. The purpose of these pictures is to remind us that on no account can we ignore the over-exploitation of ocean resources. During the past hundred years, commercial fishing experienced a robust growth, heralding the steep decline in fishery resources which has, until now, still been neglected by us. Two key factors—reveling in the huge profits made from fishing and lacking the awareness of ecological protection—contribute to the current situation. If overfishing remains uncontrolled, the marine food chain will be disrupted, thus damaging the oceanic ecological balance. To end this thorny situation, drastic measures should be taken. The most basic and effective way is to pass laws and regulations to control commercial fishing. Moreover, we should raise the public awareness that ocean resources are vital to us. I believe that with joint efforts, we human beings are sure to solve the problem at bottom and embrace a bright future.

解析     本次命题是在1998年之后考研写作历史上第二次考查图画作文,堪称图画命题的典范。它首次将两幅图进行了对比,这一举措将直接影响到2000年之后的命题趋势。
    两副图画分别向我们展示了1900年和1995年的渔船数和鱼量变化情况。通过对比不难发现,近一个世纪以来,商业捕捞经历了快速扩张,随之引发了一个重要的问题:海洋资源消耗殆尽。图画寓意明显,旨在告诫人们应停止无节制的商业捕捞行为,否则海洋生态平衡,乃至整个人类的生存都将受到威胁。环保这类话题涉猎内容较多,考生在写作时切忌思维过于发散,引出环境污染、森林退化、全球变暖等问题,导致失分。
    第一段:联系图画,点明主题——商业捕捞使海洋资源面临枯竭。描述图画时应着重对比两幅图中的渔船数量以及鱼量变化情况,以烘托主题。
    第二段:挖掘图画深层含义。不但要立足现在,分析目前的严峻形势,而且要展望未来,说明如果对过度捕捞不加以控制,会带来哪些更为严重的后果。
    第三段:总结评论。提出应对措施,可以从政府和个人这两方面入手。
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