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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the saying "To talk big about the lofty ideal witho

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the saying "To talk big about the lofty ideal witho

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the saying "To talk big about the lofty ideal without doing any practical work will get one divorced from reality." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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答案 To talk big about the lofty ideal without doing any practical work, as the remark has it, will get one divorced from reality. We should set ourselves realistic goals. Besides, we should start from now and transform our goals into concrete steps and then complete all steps one by one. (提出观点段) There are many facts supporting that ideality should be based on reality and its realisation lies in doing practical work. First of all, lofty ideal is difficult and even impossible to achieve. For example, it is definitely ridiculous for common people to set a goal as surpassing the Olympic champion, Usain Bolt, in running. Furthermore, to pursue an unrealisticgoal, people may find them painfully incapable and may use all means to make it. For example, some athletes take stimulants to get good marks in race and be punished at last. In addition, people who aim too high but make no effort will cry with empty dreams at last. (论证观点段) All mentioned above tells us that to make dream come true, we must base it on reality. When we set a goal, we should carefully consider its feasibility, Therefore, we should make efforts and strive for realistic goals. (总结观点段).
解析 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求针对“离开社会实践而空谈远大理想。就会脱离实际”(to talk big about the lofty ideal without doing any practical work will get one divorced from reality)这句话展开评论，首先要把这句话和我们之前做过的“行动胜于空话”区别开，这里不是说了没做，而是说得和做得不得当(talk big和without doing any practical work)将会导致脱离实际，区别开了这点也就把握住了论证重点，从中我们也可以看出，设定适当的目标而不是好高骛远是很重要的，因此可以用观点论证型行文。
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