Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the picture briefly,
    2) interpret its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points)
   

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答案 Here is a picture, interesting but with deep implication. As is vividly depicted in the photo, four persons are having dinner. If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that they all focus on their own phone and do not have communication. Obviously, what the drawing subtly conveys should be given more concern. What might account for the problem conveyed in the picture? Theoretically, several reasons may trigger it, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance. On the top of the list is that people are dependent too much on their mobile phone and overlook the face-to-face communication. There is another point that no one can ignore. It is widely admitted that the young men have got used to this kind of "invisible communication", which may make them feel safe. This also causes their unwillingness of direct communication. According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, to appeal to the media’ s publicity may be the most effective one, which can make the public treat their mobile phones in a reasonable way. Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.

解析     本文严格按照题目说明,首段简要地阐述图画内容,第二段揭示了图画包含的深层寓意,末段给出了自己的看法,感情真挚细腻,并能从孝顺的观点最后升华到和谐社会。全文紧扣主题,准确达意,词汇丰富,句式多变,是一篇不错的范文。
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