Write a letter to the president of your university to 1)point out the problems of the canteen service on the campus, and

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问题     Write a letter to the president of your university to
    1)point out the problems of the canteen service on the campus, and
    2)make suggestions for improvement.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address.(10 points)

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答案 Dear Mr. President, I am a senior in the Biology Department I’m writing to tell you some problems with the canteen service on campus and some suggestions on it. We really don’t think much of the quality of the food. The rice and bread are too hard for us to chew. The vegetables are often overcooked. Besides, the price of the food is too high. You know, some students’ families are very poor, and they are even short of tuition fees. How can they afford such expensive meals? Furthermore, the attitude of the service staff to us is not acceptable. Therefore, I suggest that we should have more than one canteen in the university. If there is competition between them, the above-mentioned problems will be solved more easily. I sincerely hope that the canteen service will be improved soon. All of us will appreciate it. Thank you for your consideration! Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析 这篇应用型书信习作,要求考生撰写一封信,根据写作要求,作者可以先对存在的问题提出批评,然后提出相应的建议。写作时注意语言要得体,言辞不要太过激。根据题目要求,文章的结构安排如下:第一段开门见山,指明写信的目的。第二段具体描述食堂存在的问题:①饭菜质量很难令人满意②饭菜价格太高③服务质量令人难以接受。第三段简要提出建议。第四段简要总结,注意使用礼貌语。
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