After graduating from college, most graduates have to face a difficult choice of where to find a job. Should university graduate

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问题     After graduating from college, most graduates have to face a difficult choice of where to find a job. Should university graduates choose to work in large modern cities, such as Beijing and Shanghai, or to work in small towns? Different people have different ideas. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and then give your view on the issue.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Yes:
    In big cities, like Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou, young people can have many more opportunities than in small towns. Those big cities are usually economically developed areas in China, and therefore many Chinese and international companies choose to do business there. For young university graduates, they can have far more chances to find a promising job in big cities.
    If college graduates choose to work in big cities, they can have opportunities to get in touch with elites in every field. Many forums and international meetings are held in big cities, providing great opportunities for young people to enrich their knowledge and renovate their thinking. Living and working in big cities can also help broaden their horizons.
    In big modern cities, one’s ability is far more important than his family background. As long as one is diligent and hard-working, he can build up a bright future by himself.
    No:
    Big cities like Beijing and Shanghai are the most developed areas in China, but at the same time, the living costs there are also too high to afford. Although the salary in big cities is higher than that in small towns, the costs of living are even higher.
    The competition in big cities is too fierce, and the pace of life there is too fast for people to bear. In some top 500 companies, it is quite common for employees to work till midnight. In order to get a promotion, young people have to face greater pressure, and therefore both their mental and physical health is at risk.
    If graduates choose to work in small cities or towns, their salaries may not be that high, but they can live a healthy and normal life. Instead of working overtime, they can relax themselves on the weekend, such as going outdoors and attending gatherings.

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答案 The Bright Prospect in Big Cities When it comes to the vast pool of young college graduates, they are really on the horns of a dilemma when choosing a proper place to start their careers. To choose a big modern city like Beijing or to stay in a small town is a tough question. Some graduates prefer big cities, for the metropolises, with multitudinous opportunities, have strong appeal for them. Small towns, in some other graduates’ opinion, create a comfortable work environment. In my point of view, I believe youth is the time for us to strive to be successful, and there is no better place for us to do so than in big cities. Firstly, although the competition in big cities is intense, we can give full play to our initiative. As long as we keep making efforts toward our dreams, we will surely enjoy a rosy future. If graduates can weather the initial difficult situations, what they will embrace is a bright future. Secondly, in big cities, there are more chances for graduates to improve themselves. Once they seize a chance, their sweat and tears will get rewarded. Lastly, owing to the fact that many companies and organizations at home and abroad are headquartered in highly developed cities, young graduates are more likely to widen their intellectual horizons in big cities. In conclusion, I strongly hold that it is better for graduates to choose a job in big cities. The vast opportunities there will enable young people to exploit their potential and realize their dreams. Although life in big cities may be more difficult and arduous, people will see their efforts paid off if they are determined to seize the opportunities.

解析     本题讨论的是大学生就业时该不该选择大城市。在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正反双方的观点;然后提出和阐述自己的看法,并给出理由;最后总结全文。
    开头部分第一段开门见山地引入话题,并简要概括双方的观点。正方认为毕业生应该去大城市找工作,因为大城市机会多;反方则认为小城市的工作环境更舒适。
    中间部分第二段用“In my point of view…”引出自己的观点,即毕业生应该选择在大城市工作,然后用 “Firstly…”“Secondly…”和“Lastly…”引出三点理由:1)虽然大城市竞争很激烈。但只要挨过最初的困难。就会有美好的未来;2)大城市有更多的机会可以提高自身能力,只要抓住机会,所有的辛苦都将有所回报;3)国内外很多大企业的总部都设在大城市,这有助于毕业生开阔眼界。
    结尾部分第三段重申自己的观点,总结全文。
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