For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness. You should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below:
1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法。
2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面,也指……

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答案 How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness (1) The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. (2) However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it. (3) In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also concerns several other aspects. (4) Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. (5) Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant. (6) As a college student, I am convinced that never can money be equal to happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich our knowledge, broaden our horizon and cultivate our ability.

解析 (1)开篇使用三个排比句从多个方面指明了幸福感的重要性。
(2)通过转折,引出在当代中国,人们关于幸福感以及如何提升幸福感有不同的看法。
(3)这句话使讨论重点转移到了幸福感的非物质层面。
(4)首先从外在方面论述了成功、友谊与爱情在幸福感方面的作用。
(5)其次说明了健康的重要性。
(6)引出自己的观点,并提出如何才能提升幸福感。
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