Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on

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问题     Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)

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答案 Dear Sir or Madam, As an enthusiastic reader, I am writing to share some of my suggestions with the hope of making some improvement. I have found that there are a great number of magazines out of date here. Many times it is difficult for me to find the latest reading materials I need badly. It will help us a lot if you can introduce some new journals, which will bring fresh air to the library. Meanwhile, since the books are distributed everywhere, we can introduce a computer information searching system so as to give us effective results and save our precious time. Thank you for your reading and I am looking forward to new changes soon. Sincerely Yours, Li Ming

解析     本文围绕三段式展开,第一段开门见山,直奔主题,点明写信目的;第二段委婉地指出了图书馆现存问题带来的不便之处,并提出了相应的改进措施;第三段礼貌地表达出期望尽快看到新的变化。全文结构紧凑,合情合理。
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