For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Key to Becoming a Talented Person following the ou

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Key to Becoming a Talented Person following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.有人认为成才的关键是个人能力
    2.有人认为成才的关键是外部机遇
    3.我的观点

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答案 The Key to Becoming a Talented Person Different people hold quite different opinions about the key to becoming a talented person. Many people assert that personal abilities count for much. They maintain such an idea because a lot of people stand out in their peers for their remarkable capacities. However, others believe that opportunities play a vital role in one’s success, which helps to explain why some people become prominent while others similarly talented are left behind. As far as I’m concerned, the internal capabilities are much more important than external opportunities for a person to become talented. First, there are various chances in our society but only those who are adequately prepared can make good use of them to achieve their goals. Second, without a ready mind, golden opportunities may slip through one’s fingers. Last but not least, no matter whether there are favorable opportunities or not, what we should do is learn and improve ourselves constantly. In a word, we can take advantage of opportunities to achieve success but never can they be a precondition for success. Comparatively speaking, personal abilities are more important for a person to become talented.

解析     第一段提出两种不同的观点。一种观点认为,有人认为成才的关键是个人能力,因为很多人能在同龄人中出类拔萃主要是因为个人能力强。另外一种观点认为,外部机遇在个人成功中起着重要作用。本段既有宾语从句、非限制性定语从句,还有并列分句,一起构成长句,句式层次感强,表达内容丰富。
    第二段阐明自己的观点,即认为个人能力要比外部机遇更重要些,只有充分准备的人才能更有效地利用机会。
    第三段总结全文,重申主题。
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