Zhang Hong, one of your university classmates, is seriously ill and hospitalized. Write a letter to 1) express your sorry to hea

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问题 Zhang Hong, one of your university classmates, is seriously ill and hospitalized. Write a letter to
1) express your sorry to hear her bad news,
2) encourage her to overcome the illness, and
3) offer your help.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

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答案 A Letter of Consolation Jan. 19th, 2013 Dear Zhang Hong, I am terribly sorry to hear that you are suddenly ill and hospitalized. I do feel much worried when I get to know that you received an operation last week. I do hope that you have enough confidence to overcome the illness since in my mind you are always a girl of conviction. With the advanced medical facilities and experienced doctors in No. 301 People’ s Liberation Army Hospital, you will soon recover. Anyway, your state of mind and co-operation with doctors are of much importance. From now on, I will send you text messages via mobile phone every day to give you spiritual support. I do hope that you will recover and come back soon. Sincerely yours Li Ming (122 words)

解析 文章第二段的叙述十分具体真实、层次鲜明,这是高分写作的最大特点。
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