1. 说明自己的身份和租房的目的; 2.简单叙述理想公寓的条件; 3.费用问题和联系方式。 Apartment Wanted

admin2009-09-12  50

问题 1. 说明自己的身份和租房的目的;
2.简单叙述理想公寓的条件;
3.费用问题和联系方式。
                 Apartment Wanted

选项

答案 Apartment Wanted ① I am Robert, an oversea student from America, 19 years old. I have been studying Chinese in Peking University for more than two years. This summer, my parents will visit Beijing and stay with me for about a month, ② so I am eager to find an apartment in the neighborhood of the campus for our family reunion. ③ I would like to rent an apartment with one living room, two bedrooms, one independent kitchen and bathroom with 24 hours hot water supply. ④ It will be preferable if it is equipped with laundry facilities, broadband and cable TV. ⑤ I’m willing to pay up to 2000 Yuan for the right apartment for one month. ⑥ If you have one available, please call or e-mail me. My mobile phone number: 13900000000, e-mail address: rohert@163. com. Thanks!

解析    ①审题及布局。题目要求写一篇应用文[考频:5]:房屋求租广告。写作时目的要明确,表述要清楚,要让读者准确理解广告信息。在布局上,按照提纲的要求展开写作即可。第一段说明自己的身份和租房的目的;第二段简单叙述理想公寓的条件,如房间大小、室内设施;第三段告知自己能够承受的房租费用和联系方式。②语言。本文是一则广告,因此应该多使用口语化的表达,力求简洁、清晰,避免使用生僻词汇。就时态而言,因为多为讲述现在事实,采用一般现在时即可,其中某些涉及未来事件的表达可使用一般将来时。
[写作模板]
   I am ______. I ______ University for ______, so I am eager to find an apartment in the neighborhood of the ______ for ______.
   I would like to rent an apartment ______. It will be preferable if it is equipped with ______.
   I’m willing to pay up to ______ Yuan for tile right apartment for one month. If you have one available, please call or e-mail me. My mobile phone number: ______, e-mail address: ______.
   Thanks!
转载请注明原文地址:https://kaotiyun.com/show/hG37777K
0

最新回复(0)