[A] Title: THE "PROJECT HOPE" [B] Time limit: 40 minutes [C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening

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问题     [A] Title: THE "PROJECT HOPE"
    [B] Time limit: 40 minutes
    [C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
    [D]  Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: "Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country."
    [E] Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points) OUTLINE:
    1. Present situation
    2. Necessity of the project
    3. My suggestion

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答案 THE "PROJECT HOPE" Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. However, more than 37 million primary and secondary school students in the poverty-stricken areas are obliged to quit school. Thus, a financial plan called Project Hope is advocated. The project, which brings the hope for children and promises a bright future for China, is quite necessary. As we know, being deprived of education will not only result in exhaustion of human resources in those poverty-stricken areas, but also hold back the economic development of the whole country. So developing e ducation to arm youngsters with knowledge is an urgent task and a responsibility of the entire society. We should finance Project Hope with money. Moreover, it needs our love and strong sense of responsibility for those children. As it says, "knowledge is a lamp leading people into the world of brightness and beauty", so is Project Hope.

解析     本文中心突出,结构严谨。第一段指出了“希望工程”项目实施的背景,即教育的重要性和贫困地区教育资源的缺乏。第二段介绍了实施“希望工程”项目的必要性,它对孩子个人和整个社会都有重要作用,文章脉络非常清晰。第三段简短有力,进一步延伸主题,指出社会大众可以进行资金支持和奉献爱心,最后以俗语作总结,画龙点睛。本文流畅不仅来自于思维的连贯,并且归功于诸多连词的应用。
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