Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think i

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问题     Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified, while others think it is unfair. Which side do you agree with? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Sports Professionals’ Earning So Much Is Justified/Unfair
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Sports Professionals’ Earning So Much Is Justified Sports stars are not only famous among young people but also envied by many middle-aged men, who long for wealth. An internationally renowned tennis player could make 100 million US dollars a year, an amount average people could not even dream about. However, I think sports professionals deserve this high pay. First of all, the career of professional players is usually risky, which is worthy of high returns. Shoulder injuries during practice, tissue damage in games and irreversible symptoms after operation, all haunt each and every sport professional. For instance, Sang Lan, a gymnastic athlete, landed on her head and paralyzed herself from chest down at a young age. With high risks come high returns. This is fully justified. Second, it requires years of efforts and commitment to become a sport professional. No matter how talented one can be, he still needs to get drilling, exercises and training. David Beckham, for example, confessed that he had to kick the football many times a day to refine and perfect his shooting skills. There is nothing wrong about the rewards if one is working hard for them. In conclusion, I think sports professionals are justified to earn a lot of money, because of the high risk they take and the hardship they go through.

解析     本题属于“立场选择型”作文,涉及的题材是“社会生活”。该题要求考生对“职业运动员赚那么多钱是否公平”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从网球运动员的收入提出话题,指出职业运动员获得如此高收入是应得的。
    第二段:阐述原因。首先,职业运动员的职业生涯充满风险,因此高回报也是合理的。举桑兰为例;其次,要成为职业的运动员需要长年的努力和投入。举大卫.贝克汉姆为例。
    第三段:重申观点——职业运动员冒了高风险,也经历了艰辛的训练。因此,他们应该拥有高收入。
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