For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Determination Outweighs Talent by commenting on the saying,

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Determination Outweighs Talent by commenting on the saying, " There is no such thing as a great talent without great willpower." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Determination Outweighs Talent Balzac, a famous French writer once said, "There is no such thing as a great talent without great willpower." It means that the willpower to succeed is more important than the talent. To many people, to be successful requires a lot of things, such as diligence, skill, talent, and even luck. However, the determination to succeed triumphs over all, because if you don’t possess the willpower to excel at something, your talent may wither away. Many of my acquaintances achieve their goals not only because they are hard-working or exceptionally talented, but because they have set their mind to accomplish what they desire. Likewise, I have borne witness to many others who were equally talented or qualified, but didn’t become who they deserve to be simply because they overlooked their ability and lacked the determination to try to make changes in their life. Therefore, determination is a crucial factor that determines people’s success. A person with a stronger will is more likely to realize his life goals.

解析     这是一篇议论文,讨论的是毅力和才华的重要性。
    第一段引用法国作家巴尔扎克的名言点明文章的主题:毅力比才华更重要。
    第二段对引言进行评论,从正反两方面论证毅力对成功起到的关键性作用,用自己身边的人举例说明。成功的人不仅是因为他们努力、有才华,更因为他们有不达目的,誓不罢休的精神。很多同样有才华的人没有作出应有的成就,因为他们忽视了自己的天赋,缺乏毅力。第一句中to besuccessful不定式形式作主语,本段也不乏名词性从句、定语从句等,结构紧凑,篇章连贯。
    第三段总结全文。毅力是决定人生成败的关键因素,意志力强的人更容易成功。
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