假定你是南京某中学的学生,叫李华。“五一”劳动节将至,你校外籍教师Alex打算利用“五一”长假外出旅游,希望你能为他提供参考建议。请你根据下列图表中的内容为Alex提供旅游建议。要求词数在100左右。

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问题     假定你是南京某中学的学生,叫李华。“五一”劳动节将至,你校外籍教师Alex打算利用“五一”长假外出旅游,希望你能为他提供参考建议。请你根据下列图表中的内容为Alex提供旅游建议。要求词数在100左右。

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答案Dear Alex, Here is my suggestion about your travel during the long May Day holiday. On May 1st, you may take the 8:00 flight to Beijing. You are to visit the Tiananmen Square in the afternoon. Next day, I suggest you (should) visit the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next two days, you can visit the Summer Palace, walk around here and there in the downtown section of Beijing and do some shopping. On May 5th, you are to take a train to Tai’an to climb Mount Tai, which is quite near to the city. You have to stay at the top for the night, and next early morning, if lucky, you may enjoy a wonderful view of the sunrise, which will never be forgettable indeed. In the afternoon, you may return to Nanjing by train. I hope you will enjoy your travel. Yours, Li Hua

解析     (1)此类作文容易写成单调的时间状语的堆砌。建议使用(and)next day,for the next two days等,以取代on May…。
    (2)在动同时态上,应用将来时,在表示预期时考虑使用be to do句型。
    (3)图表中提到登长城、游览颐和园、登泰山等活动,建议使用“后位补述”的写作手段,如:
    …and I do think it will make you feel really excited
    …which is one of the few places in the world that enjoy a long history and is still well known
…on top of which, if lucky enough, you will enjoy a view of the sunrise
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