For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the importance of apology by referring to the remark "An apolo

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the importance of apology by referring to the remark "An apology is the super glue of life. It can repair just about anything. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what people should do when making an apology. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 The Importance of Apology [1] As the Chinese saying goes, [6] "To err is human." We are all ordinary individuals and [2] it is inevitable that we make mistakes or hurt others sometimes in our life. And though we make most mistakes unintentionally, [3] it’s necessary for us to learn to apologize for an apology is the super glue of life which can repair just about anything. [4] For one thing, a genuine apology involves the recognition and remorse of the harm done to the victim, which may dissolve the hatred and restore relationships. [5] In 1970, Prime Minister of Germany knelt down in front of the memorial of Warsaw Ghetto and apologized for [6] the crime that German Nazis had committed on those innocent Jews and the action was welcomed by forgiveness and a long-term peace for both countries. [4] For another thing, an authentic apology means the wrongdoers learn to [6] shoulder responsibility for the harm they have done and reaffirm the value of rules and obligations. [7] Therefore, it’s important for us to learn to apologize once the mistakes are made. [8] On the one hand, we should earnestly reflect on our mistakes. [8] On the other hand, sincerity is a necessity when apologies are made.

解析 [1]引用中国古语
[2]引出话题
[3]结合题目中名言引出主题
[4]从两方面论述道歉的作用
[5]引用名人名事,更有说服力
[6]亮点词汇:To err is human.“人非圣贤.孰能无过”:commit the crime“犯罪”;shoulder responsibility“承担责任”
[7]承上启下,总领本段
[8]提出两点建议
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