My View on Self-confidence Self-confidence is an attitude which allows individuals to have positive yet realistic views on t

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问题     My View on Self-confidence
    Self-confidence is an attitude which allows individuals to have positive yet realistic views on themselves and their situations. It is extremely important in almost every aspect of our life. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    My View on Self-confidence
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案 My View on Self-confidence My Mend Lucy scored 8 in the IELTS test but she did not apply for any job in foreign enterprises. When asked why, she said, "My English is not good enough. " Her answer showed a lack of self-confidence, a good quality that college students should cultivate. First of all, self-confidence is a state of mind that enables us to think positively about ourselves. Some students, like Lucy, beat themselves up, because they think they are not perfect. They underrate themselves and live in shadows cast by themselves. If we are confident in ourselves, we would notice our own talents and have a realistic and positive view about ourselves. Secondly, self-confidence enables us to weather through difficult times. For instance, a job interview in a foreign enterprise might be a challenge. Unlike Lucy, my friend Mike, who only scored 6 in the IELTS test, failed in a few job interviews. But he believed that he will get a chance one day. With his self-confidence and sound preparation, he finally secured a job in a foreign enterprise. That is how self-confidence made a difference. In conclusion, we could be Lucy, lack of confidence and pitying herself or we could be Mike, sure of himself and willing to stretch for a goal. Personally, I would choose to be Mike, because self-confidence can bring hope.

解析     本题属于“自由发挥型”作文,涉及的题材是“品德修养”。该题要求考生对“自信”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从朋友露茜的故事入题,指出自信是大学生应该培养的品德。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.自信是一种状态,让我们对自己有正面的认识。举露茜为例。
    2.自信能让我们度过困难的时刻。举麦克为例。
    结尾:我们可以选择当露茜或麦克,我会选择像麦克一样,因为我们都有为之而自豪的才华。
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