Write an essay by commenting on the following saying. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write a

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问题     Write an essay by commenting on the following saying.
    You can give examples to illustrate your point.
    You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
    一根链条,最脆弱的一环决定其强度;一只木桶,最短的木板决定其容量。

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答案 The saying that "The chain tends to break at its most vulnerable link and water flows out of the bucket at its shortest board" vividly and impressively indicates the philosophy that overall quality is determined by weaknesses rather than strengths. This philosophy should always be borne in mind by government officials in a country where there is a sharp gap between the rich and the poor, for the latter, like the shortest board of a bucket, determines the overall level of a country’s development. If poor people’s living standard remains low, they are likely to become the vulnerable link of a chain, posing potential threat to social stability. In view of the gap between the rich and the poor that may act as one of the shortest boards delaying China’s development and social stability, I hope that the government would find inspiration from the above-mentioned philosophy and attach more importance to the poor, so as to better promote social progress and build a more harmonious society.

解析     本题为对所给引言的评论与分析。下笔前,需先仔细研读该引语以提炼其关键信息。该引言传达的信息可概括为:
    无论事物本身有多牢固,只要出现一处纰漏,都将触一发而动全身,造成严重后果。结合题目要求,文章结构可安排如下:
    第一段:简单分析引言,引出核心论点:整体水准由劣势部分而非优势部分决定。
    第二段:以贫富差距的存在阻碍国家发展为例论证核心论点。
    第三段:表明自己的观点,总结全文。
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