A. Title; ON MAKING FRIENDS B. Time limit: 40 minutes C. Word limit; 120 - 150 words (not including the given opening se

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问题     A. Title; ON MAKING FRIENDS
    B. Time limit: 40 minutes
    C. Word limit; 120 - 150 words (not including the given opening sentence)
    D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence; "As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. "
    E. Your composition must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points) Outline:
    1. The need for friends
    2. True friendship
    3. My principle in making friends

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答案 As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. Inevitably, we will encounter numerous problems and conflicts in our life journey, thus we need friends to give us a hand. They help us out by offering advice, giving warnings a-gainst danger and encouraging in good time. In modern times, by realizing the importance of friends, more and more people are willing to make friends. However, at different stages of our life,we meet different kinds of friends, such as our childhood buddies, classmates from college and colleagues at work. Then, which kind is true friendship? In my opinion, there is no strangeness between true friends even if they are out of touch for a long time; true friends are eager to see each other grow and succeed in each aspect of life. Sometimes, a true friend is another self who can understand you more than yourself. He knows what you want and who you want to be without saying anything and he will be on your side the moment you are in dilemma. I have two principles in making friends; trust and forgiveness. First of all, we, especially girls, always take pouring out our feelings as a kind of stress relief, which really is a dangerous way to reduce stress without trust. In addition, forgiveness shall be the first thought for true friends in case of collision.

解析         本题要求以“论交友”为题写一篇作文,文章的提纲已经给出:1.对朋友的需要;2.(何为)真正的友谊;3.我的交友原则。这个话题对于考生来说并不陌生,所以在论述时可挑选自己熟悉的角度,保证文章言之成理,结构符合要求即可。
    第一段:阐明对朋友的需求。本段可先指出在遇到困难时,我们需要朋友;接着阐述朋友通过哪些方式给予我们帮助;最后点出越来越多的人已经认识到了朋友的重要性,从而乐于交友。
    第二段:探讨何为真正的友谊(即真正的朋友)。本段开头可由我们会交到不同的朋友引出本段论点:何为真正的友谊,后文可从三个方面对此问题进行阐述,即友情持久、相互支持和彼此了解。
    第三段:阐述我的交友原则。末段阐述自己的交友原则,也就是自己最看重的朋友之间存在的品质,即信任和原谅。
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