Below is a photo showing primary school students receiving military training. Look at the photo and write an essay of about 120

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问题     Below is a photo showing primary school students receiving military training. Look at the photo and write an essay of about 120 words, making reference to the following points:
    1. a description of the photo
    2. your comment on such training programs for children


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答案 The picture shows some primary students who are receiving military training. Look at those children, they are wearing uniforms and hats, standing straightly in a line. From the picture we can see that they take the training seriously and try to do their best. Now in China, most children arc the only child in their families. It is for sure that their parents love them so much that they don’t want their children to be hurt in any way. So they would do everything for their children. This will result in children’s lack of ability to be independent. Taking military training can make the children learn to be independent. Because during the training children have to do everything by themselves. No one would wash clothes for them or get food ready just waiting for them to eat. Besides, children don’t take enough exercises today due to their study task. Taking military training also help them to do some exercises. For all above, I think taking military training is good for children. But we should consider that children are still young, and the training task shouldn’t be too hard.

解析     看图作文要求考生对图画进行观察分析,找出图中的内在联系和所表达故事的中心思想,对图中的故事进行叙述或对图画所表现的内容进行描述并发表评论,要根据题目要求来撰写作文。
经典词句:
    1.The picture shows that.../Look at the picture below,it describes a story...在写看图作文的时候,我们可以用这样的句子来开头。
    2.take the training seriously认真地对待军训;take sth. seriously认真地对待某事
    3.the only child in the family独生子女
    4.be good for对…有好处
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