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问题     Along with the mass use of computer technology in education, we are delighted to witness the convenience brought by computers. Some people even argue that teachers will not be necessary in the classroom any more. Is this reasonable? Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and then give your view on the issue.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Yes:
    The 21st century is also called the information age, in which the computer plays an important role in every field of our life. There is no denying that the computer brings great benefits to people and is of great help to students.
    Recently, the computer-assisted education has become more and more popular in primary schools, high schools and colleges.
    The multimedia function of the computer makes classes more vivid and interesting. With its unique superiority, a computer can become the best teacher in the classroom. Vivid pictures shown on the screen can motivate students’ interest and curiosity dramatically. Moreover, the combination of computers and the Internet can provide students with abundant information.
    No:
    A computer, unlike a real teacher, can’t solve a variety of new problems. Everything develops so fast in today’s society, including education. What if a student suddenly asks a creative question that the computer isn’t programmed for? A computer can do nothing, while a teacher can explain the question according to his or her abundant teaching experience.
    Moreover, a computer can’t communicate with students emotionally. With a gesture or eye contact, a teacher can transfer his or her ideas or feelings to the students. In this way, students can enjoy more human care in the classroom.

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答案 Can Computers Replace Human Teachers? Computers, the most exciting and significant invention in the 20th century, are reshaping our lives and the world. As a result, some people claim that computers should be introduced into classrooms and replace human teachers, while others argue against it. As for me, I don’t agree with the opinion that computers can take the place of human teachers. Among countless factors which influence my inclination, the most conspicuous one is that a computer is not as qualified as a human teacher in the academic field. As we all know, students can easily get the final result of a mathematic question with the help of a computer. However, they can still be confused about the whole calculation process. By contrast, a human teacher’s performance is much better in this case. A teacher can not only teach students how to analyze and calculate, but also remind them of the possible errors that they may make. Thus, human teachers are more adequate than computers in the academic aspect. What’s more, human teachers can help students solve psychological problems that many students may encounter in school. In China, sometimes, teachers even play the role of students’ parents. For example, it is the duty of teachers to deal with students who are rebellious, and to prevent students from campus violence, or even crime. Obviously, computers cannot do that. In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the role of human teachers in education is irreplaceable.

解析     本题讨论随着科技的发展,电脑能否取代教师在课堂上传道、授业、解惑。在具体行文方面,考生要先概述正方观点:电脑有助于让课堂更生动、有趣,激发学生的兴趣和好奇心;接着概述反方观点:电脑的缺陷在于缺乏与人的情感沟通。然后给出自己的观点,即电脑不能取代教师,并加以阐述。最后总结全文。
    开头部分第一段介绍背景,引入话题,并概述正反方的观点。
    中间部分通过“As for me…”提出自己的观点:电脑不能取代老师。接着详细阐述理由:第一是在学术及教学方面,电脑无法取代老师,因为老师不仅可以帮助学生分析问题,还能提醒学生可能会犯的错;第二是老师在学生遇到心理问题时可以及时疏导,这是电脑所做不到的。
    结尾部分最后 用 “In summary…”总结全文,重申自己的观点。
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