For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Stock Speculation on Campus. You should write at least

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Stock Speculation on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.近年来许多在校大学生开始炒股
    2.大学生炒股的利弊
    3.我的观点

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答案 Stock Speculation on Campus In recent years, with the growing consciousness of investment, the stock market has attracted many university students. It has become a fashionable idea among many students that trading stocks is better than saving money. Every coin has two sides and stock speculation is no exception. When it comes to the advantages, many people reckon that students should learn to manage personal finances. Otherwise, it will be difficult to achieve success in the fiercely competitive society. Stock speculation can help to train this important capability, which is beneficial to their future. However, we should never neglect the disadvantages of this phenomenon. Students who spend too much time in stock speculation will inevitably put their study aside. In addition, most students have neither strong financial support nor mature mind to stand the pressures and failures in the stock market. In my opinion, although students can gain some useful abilities through stock speculation, they cannot neglect their major task. It is more sensible to spend more time on study than to be involved in the risky investment.

解析     第一段提出随着投资意识的增强,大学生炒股成为一种热门现象。第二句使用that引导的同位语从句,增加了句子的层次。
    第二段分析大学生炒股的利弊。一方面,大学生炒股可以锻炼理财能力,增加社会经验;另一方面,大学生沉迷于炒股会浪费过多的时间,荒废了学习。第二句使用了When it comes to句型,意思是“提到,说起”,是六级写作常用句型,用于引出一种观点。例如:When it comes to theInternet,different people have different opinions.(谈到互联网,人们对之持不同观点。)
    第三段表明自己的观点:大学生应该将更多的时间放在学习上,而不是沉迷于这种风险投资。
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