For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark , "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. " You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 The Way to Success Lincoln’s famous remark makes it evident that making adequate preparations is essential for anyone who wants to succeed. Generally speaking, smart people prepare things well in advance and outperform those with little or no preparation. Preparation can make a difference to our way to success. For one thing, preparation helps us find the most efficient way to do things. Those with no preparation use the first method they can think of, but some other methods are likely to be out there and we can do things better and faster by using these methods. For another, preparation makes us ready when opportunity comes. By building our skills and acquiring knowledge, we can distinguish ourselves from others and grab the opportunity once it comes. As university students, only when we attach great importance to adequate preparation can we reach our goals and achieve success. Preparation allows us to pay special attention to the best method. Moreover, we can seize the opportunity as Seneca said "Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity."

解析     本次作文考试虽然没有提纲,但仔细分析一下,该类型的作文与常见的提纲作文的写作方法应该是一样的,仍然需要考生自己列一下写作思路,也就是说也能用上以前的老套路。第一段:评论名言,提出观点——充分的准备是成功的必要条件;第二段:通过两方面论述上述观点;第三段:总结观点。如果考生读不懂名言所示,那就麻烦了。所以,重点是看懂题目,并且能把名言中暗示的道理概括成一到两个简单的关键词。就这次作文来看,六级作文在借用国际知名考试的出题模式,也再次验证了其科学性。
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