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  3. Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: . summariz

Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: . summariz

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    . summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    . comment on whether schools should carry out disciplinary measures on students. You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
                                Vocational School Posts Pictures of Students’ Uncivilized Behavior
    A vocational school that triggered hot debate on social media after releasing photos of students’ "uncivilized" activities on campus—such as smoking, raising pets and kissing in public—said it will continue the practice, despite being questioned on social media.
    Pictures of the offenders are posted on two bulletin boards on campus.
    Ma Zhangqin, director of the Youth League office of Shandong Foreign Languages Vocational College in Rizhao, a coastal city in Shandong Province, said the administration has been posting photos of behavior it doesn’t like based on a document issued by the Ministry of Education in September 2015. The document states that schools can expose undesirable behavior to create civilized campuses.
    "I think the exposure will help," Ma said.
    The vocational school placed 33 photos on the bulletin boards—images of students engaging in the behavior that the administration frowns upon.
    The hot topic of the online discussions has been whether lovers kissing each other on campus should be regarded as uncivilized and exposed. Judging from the comments on Sina Weibo, most users thought it was not appropriate to hold couples showcasing their love on campus up to public ridicule. However, most people agreed that the school should fight smoking, littering or keeping a pet, which were forbidden on campus.
    Netizens have argued on Sina Weibo that the school had no right to prevent kissing, so long as students didn’t violate the law.
    Ma said the school didn’t oppose students falling in love, but called it uncivilized to engage in intimate behavior such as kissing in public.
    "Before snapping pictures of the uncivilized behavior, we advised students not to engage in them, including kissing on campus," he said.
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答案 Schools Should Carry out Disciplinary Measures on Students In an attempt to encourage civilized behavior on campus, a vocational school in China posted photos of undesirable activities of its students including kissing in public, which has aroused strong opposition since the action is not illegal. In my viewpoint, disciplinary measures should be imposed on students on condition that they don’t violate human rights. Sadly though, recent years have witnessed improper acts that run rampant on many campuses where students should take a leading role in self-disciplining themselves. Among these types of misbehavior, smoking in public, littering, and even kissing and caressing between lovers with no respect for others become a public eyesore. Therefore, a massive moral campaign against these types of exasperating behavior should be waged. On school campuses, strict regulations should be issued to raise students’ standards of behavior. To achieve this, first of all, schools should inform students about the boundaries of behavior covered by the disciplinary measures. Besides, to those who dare defy them, both targeted persuasion and punishments should be imposed on them. For example, the credit deduction policy adopted by American schools can be implemented in China to enforce discipline. However, the enforcement of disciplinary rules should be based on the respect for human rights. Idiosyncrasies that are neither offensive nor illegal should be generously tolerated. After all, a school should be a place where the types of uncouth behavior are tamed while the air of freedom is fully breathed. All in all, students, who determine the future of our nation, should shoulder the responsibility of improving our social environment. Hence, it is rational that their conduct should be guided and corrected as early as possible.
解析     本题要求讨论以下现象：近日，一则关于“山东外国语职业学院在校园内曝光不文明行为，公开校园情侣拥吻照片”的消息引发舆论关注。不少网友指出，学校无权干涉学生谈恋爱。在具体行文方面，考生可以在第一段简单概述所给材料的内容；第二段提出自己的观点并展开论述，论证有理有据即可；第三段再次强调自己的观点，总结全文。
    开头部分首先总结材料中的现象，指出一所学校曝光了学生的不文明行为；接着谈到学校曝光类似恋人在公共场所接吻的行为引发了热议；最后表明自己的观点，即在不违反人权的前提下，学校应该采取措施规范学生的不文明行为。
    中间部分采用推理法支撑论点。首先指出现在校园中存在的一系列不文明行为已引发了公众的厌烦之情，因此学校采取针对此类行为的措施有理有据。在具体实施方面应该考虑到两方面因素：首先要告知学生学校的纪律措施涵盖的内容；其次，针对那些故意藐视纪律的学生，要进行劝说和相应的处罚。另一方面，在制定和实施纪律措施时要考虑到人权问题，学生的自由要得到充分保障。
    结尾部分首先总结学生是国家的未来，应该承担起改进社会环境的责任；然后得出结论，即应该尽早引导和纠正学生，规范其行为。
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