2. 外语
  3. More Care for The Disadvantaged (1)在我国弱势群体已经形成。 (2)这个群体面临的各种问题。 (3)如何帮助弱势群体解决他们的问题?

More Care for The Disadvantaged (1)在我国弱势群体已经形成。 (2)这个群体面临的各种问题。 (3)如何帮助弱势群体解决他们的问题?

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问题 More Care for The Disadvantaged
    (1)在我国弱势群体已经形成。
    (2)这个群体面临的各种问题。
    (3)如何帮助弱势群体解决他们的问题?
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答案More Care for The Disadvantaged Since "the disadvantaged group" was first mentioned in the Government Work Report, this special group draws more and more attention of the whole society. In our country, the disadvantaged group refers to people who are disadvantaged in abilities to create and accumulate wealth, and inferior in job competition and having difficulties in daily life. Specifically, the disadvantaged includes farmers waiting for relief, the disabled, laid-off workers, some elderly people, and migrant workers, early retirees from government institutions and some disaster-stricken people. The disadvantaged currently faces four major problems-food, housing, medial care and children’s education, of which the latter two problems are the most worrying. Urban people living on unemployment insurance and rural people struggling in poverty cannot afford the doctor’s bill or save enough to pay for their children’s tuitions. All this may threaten our country’s economic development and the social stability. So, these problems call for immediate solution To solve these problems, the government should improve the unemployment insurance system, so that all the urban poor can have their basic living standard guaranteed. The government should also increase the input into social security expenditures, providing more subsidies to this special group. What’s more important, the government should offer low-cost or free medical care to the disadvantaged, and establish education assistance funds to help children from poor families through their education. The fundamental solution, however, is to create more job opportunities by initiating re-employment programs. Without any doubt, all the problems are great challenges to both the government and the public. But we must succeed in the cause for our country’s future.
解析     本文的提纲没有要求作者分析弱势群体形成的原因，而是侧重于问题的分析和解决这两个要素。因此本文作者开拓思路，围绕提纲，对弱势群体进行了定义，继而探讨了这个群体所面临的各种困难，并有针对性地提出了解决的方案。
    全文思路清晰，说理透彻，观点鲜明。在语言表达方面，作者用词准确、表达到位，熟练地运用语言手段强调个人观点。如文中结尾段，作者提了四点改善弱势群体生存状况的建议。在这里，作者针对上文重点讨论的问题——医疗保障和子女教育问题，特别强调了解决这两个问题的急迫性(What’s more important…The fundamental solution，however，is…)。作者准确的语言表达增强了文章的表现力和说服力。因此，在写作中，大家应该权衡各个论点和论据之间的关系，区分主次、轻重，并在表达中适当运用增强语气的词或句型来突出论述重要的方面。
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