What Is More Urgent? 什么更紧急? Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1)describe the drawi

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问题 What Is More Urgent?
什么更紧急?
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly,
2)interpret its intended meaning, and
3)give your comments.

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答案 In the picture, someone is drowning, extending a hand out of the water to seek for help. At the riverside, a group of people are gathered. Instead of trying to help, they all take out their cell phones to take pictures, which are meant to be put on their Microblogs. This appalling picture is a wake-up call for people whose conscience might have given way to their enthusiasm to social media Which is more urgent, to capture the moment and flaunt it on the Microblog or to rescue the drowning man? I believe the answer is quite evident: a person’s life should come first. Sadly, some people, in order to attract attention in the virtual world, ignore the moral and reasonable choice. From a car accident to a drowning per son, from a robbery to an abandoned baby in rain, they take photos first of whatever they see to put on their Microblogs instead of helping the person in danger. What would these indifferent people think if they were the ones in danger? In short, nothing is as important as rescuing a per son’s life. Thus, we should try hard to help others as soon as we find them in danger.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一群人拿着手机去拍落水者的情景。该图在谴责现代人在别人遇到危难时,首先采取的行动不是救人,而是拍照发微博。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,指出图片的意图:引起我们反思——救人与拍照发微博,哪个更紧急?
    第二段提出个人看法:人的生命重于名利;批判一些人为了能在虚拟世界中吸引别人的注意。遇事先想到的却是发微博而不是救人。
    第三段总结全文:没有什么事情比挽救一个人的生命重要,应第一时间去帮助那些处在危难之中的人。
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