Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: College life should be varied and colourful. And extracurricular

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问题 Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
College life should be varied and colourful. And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it. However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard. Write an article to the university radio entitled:
          The Importance of Extracurricular Activities
In the first part of your article you should clearly present your view, and in the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.  Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案          The Importance of Extracurricular Activities Dear Editor,    College life is often said to be varied and colourful. And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it. However, at present, I find there is much room for improvement in this regard. Among others, the necessity of extracurricular activities had not been adequately heeded. It is necessary, therefore, to drive home the importance of such activities.    Evidently, extracurricular activities are important in various ways. To start with, such activities can enrich the students’ college life. A student may ultimately grow tired of study if he spends all the time reading and writing. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Secondly, outside-class activities can help to develop the students’ ability to cooperate and coordinate with others. Involved in those activities, the students shift their attention from individual effort to group performance. As a result, they will grow more aware of others’ needs and functions in their life. Last but not least, extracurricular activities provide the students with an opportunity to practise what they have learned in books. Through the activities, the gap between the theory and reality can be bridged.    To sum up, extracurricular activities are of immense importance to the college students. Unless people are aware of their importance, we can never expect the college life to be fully enjoyable.

解析 1.写三段,字数150字左右。  时间35分钟。
2.第一段:针对目前大学生活中课外活动的状况提出一个需要改进的方面。第二段:具体讨论课外活动的意义。第三段:简要总结前面的讨论。
3.文体为议论文,谈自己对课外活动的重要性的认识。
4.  由于此文乃是写给学校电台的,故要注意文章格式及行文特点。
[写作提纲]
第1段:先引出话题(如大学生活仍不够丰富多彩,存在一些可改进的方面),再提出自己的观点(如认为人们对课外活动的重要性认识不够)。
第2段:给出主题句(如大学阶段课外活动十分重要),接着从不同方面论述其重要性。
第3段:(用不同的语言表达方式)重申自己的观点,总结上面的讨论,并适当引申(如指出参加课外活动是享受大学生活所必需的)。
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