Write an essay of 160- 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160- 200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
   

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答案 As is vividly shown in the picture, so burdened with the pressure of supporting their family, the young couple is trudging down the road. Nowadays, many Chinese families get trapped in such a dilemma, known as the 4 - 2 - 1 family structure—a young couple, with no siblings, cares for four aged parents as well as one little kid. The inverted pyramid family structure has become a new pattern in urban areas, mainly because of the family planning policy enforced in the past three decades. However, as time moves on, the defects hidden in such a family structure come to stand out. For one thing, young couples, both the only child in their families, are overwhelmed with work and child-raising, lacking manpower to care for their elderly parents, who are thus becoming empty nesters, exposed to loneliness and potential health risks. For another, a low fertility rate almost exactly tracks the emergence of the 4 - 2 - 1 families, further leading to an aging society and a shrinking working-age population. A certain number of social issues being incurred, the prospect for the 4 - 2 -1 family structure seems remote. The current situation demands the central and local authorities move with times and establish a brand new and effective population development strategy.

解析     随着计划生育政策在20世纪80年代初的实施,中国衍生出一种特殊的家庭结构:4—2一1,即四位老人、一对夫妻外加一个孩子。而图画所描绘的正是这样一个特殊的中国式家庭。我们不难看出,居于最底层的这对年轻夫妻苦苦支撑着圆盘上方的父母和女儿,举步维艰。图画生动形象地展示了现如今大多数年轻夫妻的生活现状。他们承受着整个家庭的重担,不仅要照顾四个年迈的父母,而且要养育年幼的子女。考生在写作时既可分析4—2—1家庭结构产生的原因,也可论述该家庭结构的弊端,做到言之有据即可。
    第一段:描述图画,点明主题。先对细节展开描述,继而引出图画主题——4—2一1家庭结构,并解释其内在含义。
    第二段:深层分析,揭示弊端。首先解释4—2一1家庭结构产生的原因,然后深入分析该模式对个人和社会带来的消极影响。
    第三段:总结评论,发表观点。指出政府应与时俱进,尽快建立新的且有效的人口发展策略。
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