Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments.

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1)  interpret the chart, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The bar chart shows the urgent needs of migrant workers. Among the nine possible options, 65.90% of the migrant workers believe that a raise in minimum wage is the priority, followed by improving social insurance (37.70%) and offering affordable social housing (29.70%). On the other hand, professional skills improvement is the least prioritized, with a mere 12.00%. Some other needs are also mentioned, such as medical care improvement (25.40%), working and living condition improvement (24.20%). This survey objectively reveals the inherent difficulties migrant workers experience. Usually, they are underpaid, and deprived of social security protection, because they are perceived as the outsiders of the local community. To ensure social justice, the government is advised to abolish local protectionism and offer migrant workers the same social protection scheme enjoyed by the locals. With the sense of belonging, migrant workers would be more motivated to commit themselves to the local community.

解析 这幅图表显示了农民工最希望政府做什么。从图表可见,农民工的诉求是按受访者同答的百分比从大到小排列的。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述柱状图。第二段分析农民工有这些诉求的原因。第三段提出建议:政府应该确保农民工享有和当地居民同等的社会基本保障。
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