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Everybody dreams of attaining success in college, hoping that such success can help them find a good job or make a fortune in th
Everybody dreams of attaining success in college, hoping that such success can help them find a good job or make a fortune in th
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2013-04-13
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Everybody dreams of attaining success in college, hoping that such success can help them find a good job or make a fortune in the future. However, many of us find it difficult to make it. How to attain success? What are your suggestions? Write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.
In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your opinion in response to Epstein’s view, and in the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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Attaining Success in College Succeeding in college is not only important to getting for education, but also crucial in this day and age to success in the work place. To me, the three most important things for attaining a successful college experience are having smart classroom conduct, taking advantage of campus resources, and making college the first priority. To begin with, attaining success in college involves smart classroom conduct consisting of regular class attendance and active class participation. Attending class regularly, the students can have access to all the information provided by the professors who always give clues to concepts that will be tested on later. In addition, the students need to get fully involved in class activities. Regular interaction with the professors not only gives them a chance to clear any questions they may have, but also gives the professors a chance to see how well they learn. And learning with their peers can be fun, too. Therefore, smart class conduct is crucial to achieving success in college. Making good use of campus resources is also of great importance to college success. The school library has many resources for the growth of the students’ mind. With computers and copy-machines for individual use, computer labs and writing labs are there not just for learning purposes but also for actual help with writing papers. The "office hours" will help the students build a close relationship with their professors and give them access to the professors mind. To from the professors the students can acquire possible extra information that may put them ahead of their study. All these resources are free, since they are funded by student tuitions. So taking good advantage of the resources can make the students’ education more attainable. Finally, any student who wants to assure success must establish school as the top priority. Personally I have watched some students slowly loosen up; I have seen a pattern of partying and a lack of motivation. Many of the freshmen have no idea why they are in college, and their "eyes" often tell it all. This world is so rich in distractions that it is hard to keep a strong focus, especially if one is just starting his or her academic career. It is said that the first semester is often the most "unsuccessful" one. This certainly rings true for me. I made mistakes in this regard and eventually learned that, to achieve success, school must always be placed above other things. In my college experience, I have observed and learned how to achieve success. I wish someone had told me earlier the importance of having that smart classroom conduct, of fully utilizing the school resources, and of making college my top priority. Then, my college beginnings would not have been so rocky and tough.
解析
本文结构合理、用词准确、句式丰富多变。主题句中,作者就提出了三点建议,即:having smart classroom conduct,taking advantage of campus resources,and making college the first priority。在正文中,作者用to begin with,also,finally三个连词将这三个建议连接,构成了连贯的整体。本文的结构十分工整,正文部分的三段中,每段都由主题句、支持句和最后的总结句构成,结构的清晰使得内容井然有序、容易理解。在第二段中,作者先对smart classroom activity进行了定义,并依据定义将其分为regular class attendance,active class participation两类,再分别加以解释说明。在第三段中,作者主要采用了例证法,列举了大学中的一些可用资源。而在第四段中,作者又以自己为例,说明了将学业放在首位的重要性。这正文的三段采用了不同的论证方式,增添了文章的趣味性和吸引力,也提高了论证的效果。
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