在2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起人们的广泛争议,下面是新浪网站的一项调查:运动员受伤后,应该坚持还是应该退出?要求你向广大网民公布调查结果: 参考词汇:腿伤foot injury;战场battlefield;坚持到底h

admin2011-01-14  58

问题    在2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起人们的广泛争议,下面是新浪网站的一项调查:运动员受伤后,应该坚持还是应该退出?要求你向广大网民公布调查结果:
   参考词汇:腿伤foot injury;战场battlefield;坚持到底hold on to the end
   注意:
   词数100词左右。

选项

答案 In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games the famous Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country. According to a survey conducted by Sina Website, about 34% of the people think that an athlete should quit the race when injured while 20% or so maintain that an injured athlete should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. The former hold that health counts much more than a gold medal while the latter regard the sport field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his or her country in spite of any difficulty.

解析    第一步:审题
   1.题型:提纲作文2.文体:说明文。
   第二步:框架分析
   1.开头点出刘翔退赛之实;2.说明人们的看法。
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起广泛的争议;2.根据新浪网调查,人们对刘翔是否应当退出比赛持不同意见,34.77%的人认为……19.36%的人认为……
   第四步:列出关键词和词组
   the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games; Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury; a heated discussion; according to a survey conducted by Sina Website, about 34% of the people think an athlete should quit the race while 20% of the citizens maintain that Liu Xiang should hold on to the end…
   第五步:落笔成文
转载请注明原文地址:https://kaotiyun.com/show/xR5d777K
0

最新回复(0)