How to Save Our Forests? The deforestation problem exists in many places in the world. More and more forests are damaged now

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问题     How to Save Our Forests?
    The deforestation problem exists in many places in the world. More and more forests are damaged nowadays, thus causing such natural disaster as landslide. It is urgent for us to protect the forests. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    How to Save Our Forests?
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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答案 How to Save Our Forests? Driven by economic benefits, many people are cutting down trees and replace them with economic crops. The short-sighted action might gain them some quick money, but in the end, they will suffer the consequences, resulted from deforestation. To save our forests, I think we should enact more stringent laws and develop a modern agriculture industry. First of all, the punishment of illegal logging should be more severe. In China, it is reported that illegal logging could be punished by financial penalty, to the amount 5-10 times of the value of the tree. In Holland, however, logging trees illegally may face up to 2-year imprisonment and a fine of 79,000 Euros. From this comparison, we can see that Chinese laws and regulations about protecting trees could be more serious by increasing fines and imprisonment. Secondly, to discourage people from felling trees to make way for crops, we should develop a modern agriculture industry, featuring high efficiency and productivity. If we adopt new breeding and management technologies to increase the productivity per hectare, farmers will not cut down trees to make room for the economic crops. In conclusion, saving our forests depends on more serious laws and enhanced agriculture technology.

解析     本题属于“问题解决型”作文,涉及的题材是“生态环境”。该题要求考生对“如何拯救我们的森林”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求。可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从砍树以种经济作物人题。指出拯救森林应该推行更严厉的法律,并发展现代化农业。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.非法砍伐的惩罚力度应该加大。对比中国和荷兰在惩罚非法砍伐的惩罚差异。
    2.要避免人们为了种植经济作物而砍伐树木,我们就要发展高效和高产量的现代农业。
    结尾:要拯救我们的森林取决于更严厉的法律和提高农业技术。
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