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  3. Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly,

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and then
    3) give your comments.
    You should write neatly.
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答案 The cartoon has vividly depicted two disabled men walking together, holding each other tightly for mutual support. Even though they have abandoned their crutches, which are often believed to be the only "friend" a crippled man can rely on, they count on the only healthy leg of each other and form a compensating pair in their journey to a brilliant future. As the words described, "With the only leg of each other, we will make it better together". By drawing this picture, the artist has successfully drawn out attention to the importance of a much needed element along our road to success: co-operation. As globalization has her way in this world, an increasing number of people begin to realize that without co-operation, transactions would not be smooth, great goals would not be fulfilled, and many human dreams would end up in smoke. For example, in the business world, the successful launching of a product depends on the work of each relevant department. Manufacturing factories produce qualified products, marketing department rack their brains for new sales strategies and after-sale service will endear& to deal with possible customer complaint. No department can do all this alone. Just as the saying goes, "United we stand, divided we fall". In order to make miracles happen in our own life, I believe, we all need a "leg", a "hand" or even a "head" from the ones around us.
解析 一、审题
    今年的大作文依然延续了多年的卡通图片作文模式。图片本身不太好懂，但是下面提供的中文"你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北"其实明确提出了文章的中心就是：虽然我们各自都有缺陷，但是只要互相帮助，取长补短，就可以一样到达成功的彼岸。
二、谋篇
    文章依然可以采取三段式。第一段描述图片：两个残疾人，一个没有左腿，一个没有右腿，但是他们把残废的腿绑在一起，互相搀扶，丢掉双拐，用残废的一条腿形成健康的两条腿，开始走南闯北，显然体现了取长补短互相帮助的力量。第二段可以联想生活，从学习到工作，每一个人都不是完人，在某种意义上我们都有着自身的残疾，但只要能够从周围的人身上学习优点，互相帮助，也可以让整个团队取得更大的成功。第三段可以具体地举出一个例子。可以举出考研路上互相帮助并成功考上理想学校的例子。
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