It has been suggested that we should adopt a flexible retirement age system, those with better health work longer for a bigger p

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问题 It has been suggested that we should adopt a flexible retirement age system, those with better health work longer for a bigger pension, those with poor health work for a shorter period of time but at a certain cost.

选项 A、fragment
B、choppy
C、comma splice
D、correct

答案C

解析 【改正】…,making those with better health work longer for a bigger pension,as well as those…
因为两个逗号后内容与前面的内容间没有连词,所以是逗号叠加句错误。首先,两个those…间为并列关系,故连词用as well as,也可以用and。It has been…system与后面的两个those…间为从属关系,可以把第一个逗号改成“逗号+making”或“逗号+which make”。
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